Saturday, December 23, 2006

finally, a new poem. i sent it in for
comments and crits to my group (bless 'em )
i rewrote it into this version and here it is.
god, it's been a long lonely time without
my words. s



people think


because i am a poet
i have words dancing
like angels on the point of my pen.

i don't
there are no angels
only blood and guts
and bones that creak
and sorrows

people think
whatever they must
to put me in a box
pretending that i'm different

that it's alright because
i'm a poet.

it's o.k. to treat me that way
because it will help the angels
whisper words in my ear.

4 comments:

Fran / Blue Gal said...

I love that. BTW I also wanted to take this opportunity to thank you for being a voice of sanity over at BG the past couple days. Doesn't work with someone who isn't sane, but I'm grateful to you nonetheless. You're a terrific writer and a great support. Thanks and have a great new year.

Mark said...

no personal offense Ms Sherry, but that so called poem....well you and Rosie O'Donnell may have something to say, just stop trying to pass it off as poetry IMHO. A couple of months ago I read some of her poetry on her web site and it seems you have the same relative self pity too deep for you type rubbish style.

But take heart it's o.k. to treat me that way
because it will help the angels
whisper words in my ear.


:)

Sherry Pasquarello said...

thanks BG. mark, it doesn't matter if you care for my poetry or not.

what rosie o has to do with any of this has be stumped.

i've never read her writing. i really do not care to. i do not care for her as an entertainer so why would i read her writing??

by the way, i am a published poet, not just a blogger, not that it sould or really does matter. my work is just that, MINE. no one twisted your arm to come here, so, go back home and read limricks. that seems to be in your depth or lit.

Sherry Pasquarello said...

oh and please excuse the typos, it's been a very long day.